On writing clearly

I help out with the editorial submission queues on more than one community news site. Sometimes I just have to vent about it.

I am by no means holding myself out as some shining example of a good writer. My own writing has plenty of flaws, some of which are laughable. No thoughtful person behind a keyboard who looks at the stuff other people write really wants to be a grammar nazi.

But people, if you think you’ve got something to say that’s so important that you simply must submit it as a guest opinion piece to some publication or another — don’t you think it’s also important enough to put some time and effort into saying clearly?

If over half of your article is text in parentheses, you may need to give some more thought to grammar, sentence structure and not letting asides detract from the logical development of your ideas.

Furthermore, ellipses [… ] are not the all-purpose punctuation mark. If you are using multiple instances of ellipses within the same sentence, and that sentence follows a similar one, and they both have multiple instances of parenthetical remarks with multiple instances of ellipses within them

Then you may want to at least glance at The Elements of Style.

In fact, you may even want to give strong consideration to the possibility that you’re just an illiterate fuck with nothing worthwhile to say.

New WordPress Theme: TigerKub

If you’re looking for Wordpress themes, then I should let you know that I’m releasing a slight modification of Liew Cheon Fong’s three-column version of the Kubrick theme as TigerKub.

Screenshot | Download

Installation: Unpack the zip archive, then upload the folder “TigerKub” and its contents to wp-content/themes on your site. Then, in Wordpress, just click “Presentation” and select the TigerKub theme.

I put this theme together for a new project. See TigerKub in action at The Longer Tail.

BTW, the domain name thelongertail.com is for sale right from Day One. Contact Thomas L. Knapp for details.

Wordpress theme development

I’m going to be using this blog as a testbed for doing some Wordpress theme development overnight tonight, so don’t freak if it looks all wacked out compared to its normal appearance/layout.

Karl’s in charge…

BTW, did I call this one:

It’s the Bush admin modus operandi all over again: micro-manage everything from the highest levels on down, based on the apparent sole concern of political appearances — and the mission itself be damned.

…or what.

All you really need to know about the White House’s post-Katrina strategy — and Bush’s carefully choreographed address on national television tonight — is this little tidbit from the ninth paragraph of Elisabeth Bumiller and Richard W. Stevenson’s story in the New York Times this morning:

Republicans said Karl Rove, the White House deputy chief of staff and Mr. Bush’s chief political adviser, was in charge of the reconstruction effort.

Rove’s leadership role suggests quite strikingly that any and all White House decisions and pronouncements regarding the recovery from the storm are being made with their political consequences as the primary consideration.

AB 1179 is a shakedown

It’s a dark day when I can’t even momentarily peruse the headlines of my favorite science geek newsletter from physorg.com to escape the overwhelmingly putrid joke that American politics has become.

In between articles on super-hard nanomaterials and news that the Cassini probe has confirmed the old Voyager sighting of radial, spoke-like structures in the rings of Saturn, there’s all this other stuff under the heading of “Technology” that more often than not consists of nothing having to do with engineering or technological advancements and everything to do with business news or politics that somehow involves the so-called “Tech Industry”.

That is how I found a thinly disguised press release masquerading as a news story called, “California game restrictions defended“.

For those who may not be aware, legislation known as AB 1179 recently passed in California restricting sales of video games deemed violent. It awaits the signature of Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger.

In response to rumors that Schwarzenegger might be of a mind to veto it, he’s getting pressure to sign it from as far afield as the Governor of Illinois, who recently signed similar legislation in that poor state. As part of that pressure campaign, we’re seeing stuff like this press release that didn’t have the serial numbers filed off particularly well emanating from an outfit called Common Sense Media.

You see, the game industry and gamers are, rightly so, howling that this nonsense is unconstitutional. Big yawn there. The Constitution hasn’t been taken seriously by anybody in power for longer than I’ve been alive. But lest harm come to the illusion that constitutional restrictions on government power are effective, we are treated to metaphorical prostitutes with a keyboard like Jim Steyer telling us that blatantly unconstitutional legislation, well, isn’t.

“This bill (AB 1179) is not about censorship or First Amendment issues at all,” Jim Steyer of Common Sense Media said in a letter to Gov. Arnold Schwarzenegger. “Rather, it is about protecting children.”

Yeah, and 2+2=5.

We’ve seen this sort of thing before, you know. By way of example, I have my problems with Microsoft — but those are problems for which I also have a handy solution. It was, however, a sad sight to see perhaps the most prominent company that was getting away with making very few political contributions suddenly develop problems with the Justice Department in the 90’s, and then suddenly start making contributions, and then the Justice Department problems sort of gradually faded away.

There’s no moral crusade going on here except in the minds of the gullible. It’s ironic as hell that games like Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas are part of this controversy, because what really seems to be going on is that the gaming industry is getting a nine shoved up their left nostril and being told: “Yo! This is a jack, bitch!”

This is how the corporate state and its allied political class bring renegade business interests to heel. You know — making sure everybody is playing on the same team. I strongly suspect that’s why the Board of Directors of Common Sense Media includes two former FCC chairmen and has ties to The Carlyle Group, Proctor & Gamble, Charles Schwab and Goldman Sachs. These people appear to be far more than just concerned citizens.

Some may think I’m being to hasty in saying that’s what might be going on. I believe, though, that whenever so much misinformation on a topic is bandied about on a professional basis, someone is looking to make their nut.

An example, from the “news story” mentioned above:

“Legal scholars also agreed that the potentially harmful effects of graphic violence on young minds and emotions were compelling reasons for the state to step in and look after their welfare.”

Well, legal scholars, being basically lawyers, can and do say the damnedest things. Let’s look at facts, though. One person who has put a few facts together is one of the persecuted himself, Duke Ferris — game software developer. In the article “The Truth About Violent Youth and Video Games” from circa 2002, Duke lays a stunning revelation on us.

First off, I have absolute proof that video games are not the cause of this epidemic of youth violence in America. No, really, I do. Ready?

There is no epidemic of youth violence in America.

The whole concept is a lie manufactured, distributed and perpetuated by the media. Kids are not killing each other more frequently than they used to. In fact, it turns out the opposite is true.

Check out that ugly graph on the right. It doesn’t take a genius to conclude that violent crime is at the lowest it has been in a good thirty years. For effect, I’ve also marked the release of the Playstation console, the first Grand Theft Auto game, the PS2 console, and the infamous GTA 3. Wow, look at those surges in violence!

Duke continues, making sure the data is adjusted for age:

I found the data sorted by age, and it turns out that through 2002, youth homicide actually dropped across the board, the only increase being among adults. If I may quote directly from the D.O.J. report, “Recently, the offending rates for 14-17 year-olds reached the lowest levels ever recorded.”

The lowest levels ever recorded. In other words, the Playstation era has, in fact, produced the most non-violent kids ever.

…and concludes:

The truth is that these are the most non-violent kids we have ever had, and they all own Playstations. The government is so desperate to find some youth crime to crack down on that they’re strip-searching kids for 10 bucks while locking up 11 year-old girls for throwing rocks and eating french fries. The most peaceful generation of Americans in recorded history is being shoved through metal detectors, having their civil rights violated on a daily basis, are the victims of unreasonable search and seizure, and are treated with constant suspicion.

All because of a media lie. If nothing else can incite them to violence, maybe that will.

Thoughtful words, indeed.

The jihad against video games kicked into high gear after the Columbine massacre in 1999. It is, then, particularly appropriate to hear what Brooks Brown, the kid who unsuccessfully tried to warn police about Eric Harris (and was essentially ignored by them) has to say on the topic of violent video games.


I’ve spent the last 6 years of my life trying to figure out why my friends brutally murdered other friends of mine and kids at school. In this process, i’ve gone through many personal changes - some good, many bad - and i’ve also gone down many avenues of thought. One of those avenues is pop culture. Granted, i was sure videogames and movies wouldn’t be a causal factor in why kids do what they do - I play violent videogames all the time, i love violent music, and i love violent movies. And i’m a taoist. I’m a pacifist. It just didn’t seem possible to me. But, i knew i had to figure it out - so i began my journey of learning exactly how videogames do effect you, and how violent imagery has an effect on the human mind.

The first thing i did was look at my favorite violent games. Although the list has changed over time, my personal favorites are the Hitman Series, Postal 2, and naturally GTA. Each of these games depicts incredibly violent acts - from using a meathook to kill a man to taking over a town to using a cat as a silencer for your shotgun. All these moments gave me enjoyment, whether it be a cheap laugh or one of those great ‘fuck yeah’ moments (you know what i mean).

Brown continued making his point:

…I realized that nobody was looking at these games right, not even me. Hitman isn’t a game about going in balls-to-the-wall. It’s about figuring out how to do things. It is, by nature, not a shooter, but a puzzle game. GTA isn’t about fucking hookers or killing cops. It’s a story of a guy who got screwed trying to get back on top. It is, by nature, a story game. Postal 2 may let you kill anyone you want in bloody and disgusting ways - but that’s not what it is about either. It is, by nature, a tech demo in the abilities of programmers and AI.

It is WE - the gamers - who change what the game is about and determine what happens. It is the person playing who determines what the game contains.

So i went to friends houses, to game stores, and i talked to people. Even went on a few message boards. And aside from a few shitheads who claimed they play GTA only to fuck hookers and kill cops, the vast majority of people are like me. The novelty of that new experience wore off - instead, we play these games now, trying to play them perfectly. Whether that means finding every square inch of land in san andreas, or getting a perfect assassin rating on Hitman - the things in these games that are violent are only a secondary thing. i no longer turn on GTA to randomly kill and nobody turns it on anymore to fuck hookers. I turn it on now to race around, find minigames, and that type of thing.

…and concludes:

Columbine was not caused by violent videogames. Eric and Dylan (the shooters) were drawn to violent videogames because they were violent, fucked up kids. I am drawn to these violen games becaue they offer more freedom. And, it may sound naive, but i believe the vast majority of gamers play these games for the same reason as me. Do you?

Glen Reynolds also weighed in on the topic with a piece titled “Porn and Violence: Good for America’s Children?“.

When teen crime and pregnancy rates were going up, people looked at things that were going on — including increased availability of porn and violent imagery — and concluded that there might be something to that correlation. It turned out that there wasn’t. Porn and Duke Nukem took over the land, and yet teenagers became more responsible and less violent.

Maybe the porn, and the videogames, provided catharsis, serving as substitutes for the real thing. Maybe. And maybe there’s no connection at all. (Or maybe it’s a different one — research indicates that teenagers, though safer and healthier, are also fatter — so perhaps the other improvements are the result of teens sitting around looking at porn and videogames until they’re too out-of-shape and unattractive for the real thing…) Most likely, the lesson is that — once again — correlation isn’t causation, despite policy entrepreneurs’ efforts to claim otherwise.

But regardless, the fears of the doomsayers were proven wrong. People can continue to claim that psychological research suggests that videogames lead to violence and that porn leads to promiscuity, but in the real world the evidence seems to suggest otherwise. That’s an argument against regulating videogames — and it’s an argument for taking other claims of impending social doom with a grain of salt.

So, there you have it. All the hype about violent videogames is plainly false. We can succumb to lies and perpetuate the parasitism of the elite, or we can try to collectively muster up enough self-respect to yell “BULLSHIT”!

This is what governments DO. They prevent genuine institutions of law from emerging by monopolizing law and using it as a cover for a giant extortion racket. There is an alternative.

Upaya on Foldvary and defining “the Market”

Upaya has a post that makes a good companion to Fred Foldvary’s latest editorial on the aftermath of Hurricane Katrina and what it teaches us about the state.

Particularly noteworthy on Upaya’s post is this segment:

When libertarians express an easy “let the market handle it” attitude, many non-libertarians will reasonably assume that this means “let for-profit commercial exchange handle it.” …getting utilities out of the hands of government is a good idea, but should they be transferred to big utilities corporations (who are likely very well connected politically) or should they be turned into consumer co-ops? From a libertarian perspective these are both shifts from state to market [emphasis added]. Indeed, as radical libertarians (left, right, or center) will be quick to point out, the consumer co-op solution is probably the more free market solution. And yet, the consumer co-op might be considered by some to be more of a “community-based” (read: grassroots and cooperative) rather than “market-based” (read: corporate, greedy, and competitive) solution. Foldvary helps to point out that the sphere of non-coercive, voluntary social activity includes commercial exchange, but also charities and “association in equality.” Hence, it seems useful to think and talk in terms of voluntary coordination, rather that (always) “the market.”

Well said.

Chertoff source of delay; White House culture of info control to blame

Get this:

Chertoff delayed federal response, memo shows - Yahoo! News

…Chertoff - not Brown - was in charge of managing the national response to a catastrophic disaster, according to the National Response Plan, the federal government’s blueprint for how agencies will handle major natural disasters or terrorist incidents.

In order to not make my excerpt to long, just let me say the the sense you get from the article is that Chertoff was waiting for Bush/Rove spin management purposes — Bush being away from D.C. at the time.

It’s the Bush admin modus operandi all over again: micro-manage everything from the highest levels on down, based on the apparent sole concern of political appearances — and the mission itself be damned.

There’s something just a wee bit unhealthy about that much concern over keeping up appearances. Rumors say the bastards are even jamming ham radio down in Louisiana to try to keep a lid on the free flow of information about the disaster. I don’t know if that’s true or not. Regardless, what ought to alarm you is the realization that it wouldn’t be out of character for these guys. After all, it seems pretty consistent with an apparent policy of assaulting and intimidating journalists in Louisiana.

We’ve seen this kind of shit before, of course, from the US military outright assassinating a Reuters cameraman to police seizing the cameras of protesters because the cops want no pictures of them kicking the shit out of you for no good reason.

What did DoD do when the Abu Ghraib story came out? They addressed the problem, alright — by banning soldiers possession of cameras.

Coming full circle back to the Gulf Coast, what sort of leadership fakes levee repairs for photo opportunity purposes in the midst of a disaster recovery operation?

These people are so fucking obsessed with spin management that they can’t do anything else right. I can’t help but wonder what it is about free communications and accurate information that scares them so much.

Fred searches in vain for Commies in China

Looking for Commies in China

Chungking is what New York would be if New York were a big city.

New article of mine in Rational Review

Notes on building a theory of revolution

Kevin Carson in UnCapitalist Journal

UPDATE: The original link doesn’t work, but Carson has republished the piece in question on his blog here.

I may be a couple of months late in noticing it, but I just want to give a big thanks to Kevin Carson for a small mention of moi in his piece Libertarian Forum: A Resource for UnCapitalists? in UnCapitalist Journal.

Although it starts out as merely a recommendation to examine the writings of the radical (nay - revolutionary) free market anarchists Rothbard and Hess; Carson’s piece becomes much more, explicitly pointing to the beginnings of a left-libertarian revolutionary agenda:

So, it seems to me, we have (in the work of Rothbard and Hess in their leftish phase) the working basis for a revolutionary coalition of free market libertarians and libertarian socialists:

*Syndicalist seizure of large enterprises (the Fortune 500 might be a useful proxy) by radical industrial unions;
*The devolution of government services, as quickly as possible, to local, cooperative ownership.
*The elimination of all corporate welfare and government subsidies, and the provision of roads and utilities on a cost-basis to those who use them (which would of course mean a radical decentralization of the economy, an end to suburban sprawl, and the growth of small-scale production for local markets).
*The nullification of all property titles based on government grants of large tracts of land, never actually appropriated by the grantee’s direct occupancy and use; and the homesteading of all such unowned land on the basis of “the land to the tiller.”
*The elimination of all legal barriers to the formation of mutual banks, by which working people can mobilize their own low-interest credit for cooperative enterprises, self-employment, etc.
*The elimination of all patent laws, which enable large corporations to cartelize their industries by controlling modern production technology among themselves.
*The treatment of scarce resources like aquifers, fisheries, mines, and old-growth forests as a socially-owned commons, with access regulated by the local community.
*The replacement of environmental and other regulatory laws with cost-based fees for access to natural resources, and common law tort damages for pollution and other impositions of cost.
*A totally free and unregulated market between the worker-controlled large enterprises, consumer and producer co-ops, social service mutuals, family farms and small businesses, and the self-employed.

Heady stuff indeed.

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